Dfeyder's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demonic Encounter]

when doing the drawing "Corn's Dream" on my page i had to shuffle though hundreds of photos of wolves, it to me a long long time to notice this: the neck on all northern wolves has grater mass then the jawline. it looks like you did the same thing i was doing and narrowing the chest and neck to meet human diminutions. it is hard to tell form this POV. but the shap of the head is not the centor of this peaces, the real draw is the fire with is cool as hell. thank you for sowing this off.

Grenyol responds:

I ended up drawing a thinner neck to symbolise the less wolf-like appearance as he is a demon, and the majority of the anatomy is different to how a live wolf would be (ie, horns, longer neck, belly plates, elongated limbs fire mains, four eyes and a thin waist) But thanks for the comment :)

[Bunny-Devil Girl]

i think the artest was going for a younger look StalkerPT that being the case the small hips and tiught butt work out just fine, it's the contour of the chest i feel would attract a sencond look, but art is art and i cant say anything against it, fifteen years of working with pin and chock and i cant do any better. thank you for the submission. i love it.

Twiddis responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the submission. Yeah, my friends have said her chest needs to be rounder. I needa improve my eye so I can spot more mistakes, and spot them sooner too. Thanks for your critique, it really helps!