Dfeyder's Reviews

[Skin : A Pixel Nightmare]

for a movie this was a lot of fun, I would bet it would make a grate gmae too. have your charcter walk around in this slowly crumbling house and talk about her relationships and then about the miscarage, it would be a lot of fun i think, and exstrodinarily unnerving.

ClockworkPixel responds:

I think it'll be alot of fun to make too have it glitch out and break the fourth wall and everything

[funny clock day]

i don't know what to say here, this looked like it was going to turn into a jump-scare but after three or for rotations nothing came up so... cool gag but i thought there would be more to it... it was cool never the less.

[Monster hunter Servs fees]

this was pretty cool, your SE is spot on to monster hunter 3, your cats are wonderful looking and full of attitude, the hunters in the background act pretty close to on line players to, fine work, thank you.

[Mr.Duck]

as the others have told you already there is some optimization problems. this will not play on firefox but the title screen is nice and the music is cool. send me a IM when this game is running and I will happily play it and write another review.

infodracoon responds:

I tried everything i can but i did not understand why touching not working on menu page so i decided to start directly game page.At least you can play.Thank you for your time.

[Jontron: Bird vs. Camel]

your sound effects are sublime, and your art is wonderful . I love it. thank you.

[Blocks 2]

around level 20 i started having trouble with looking ahead but all and all this game is likable. the controls are smooth and the sounds are not to bad. thank you. I like it. but i swear I played this game back in 2008 on another site.

[Sapphire Nine - Bamboo]

your transitions are pretty smooth, i like the intro, key change at 1:50 was fun 2:45 climax worked out i feel. i didn't have a clear three part comp. like traditional composers (Nobbuo, Duiska) but i see nothing wrong here. thank you for sharing

Silta responds:

Thanks so much for your review!
To be fair, uplifting trance tends to be a 4-part structure (intro, breakdown, release, outro), at least in the way I craft and organize it in my mind. And also keep in mind that this is only a preview of a larger work.
Besides that, I'm happy that those things sounded good to you! Things could definitely have been better, no doubt, including the structure, but I was just plain stumped on solutions for a couple issues. I figured if I'm going to start releasing tracks again, I've got to start somewhere and not just sit on the fence with a project for 9 months... again.
Here's to improving for next time!

Peace,
-SN

[Fantasia in B Minor]

this sounds amazing. is this adapted from the song written by Walt Disney? regardless, i love it, thank you. now go get yourself so taco bell and have a grate day.

FinnMK responds:

Thanks very much! No it draws no inspiration from Walt Disney's Fantasia. I just woke up and began to play and it sounded like something I had to write down/record or I would forget it and be sad for a hundred years.

[Synesthesia]

you did ask for my thoughts so: the intro seems to hold for a bit long, you might be able to trim a few beets form the top, i love the xylophone in the last third, if you toonup the crescendo at 1:25 with something that might be fun but i don't know that much about trance music so..., since you cam in on a natural sound it seems to me you could take a page from Robert Miles and fade out on the same cord. how do you feel about it?

ApprenticeBlacksmith responds:

Thank you for review!
Ye some have said that the intro and middle part needs something more to keep the intrest up and I've been playing around with few ideas. id like to add one perfectly fitting accapela to the start and middle but unfortunually everything must be made by me in the competition. It seems that even VSTis that are made for producers to have basic vocals are not allowed.
Anyway I am trying to fix the piano melody to more intresting and add something more into intro/middle.

Ah Robet Miles the "father" of trance/techno/ambience combination.
Maybe I should listen again few of his classics ;)

P.S everything I make is something that comes as a sudden inspiration and are rarely similar to something already existing unless it's happy coincidence.

[From the Night]

she is vary lagy and curvy. this is a sexy dragon. the behavior of the light on the foreground looks funky but the background and foreground where likely done apart from one another then linked in so that don't effect the overall peaces. thank you.

[Demonic Encounter]

when doing the drawing "Corn's Dream" on my page i had to shuffle though hundreds of photos of wolves, it to me a long long time to notice this: the neck on all northern wolves has grater mass then the jawline. it looks like you did the same thing i was doing and narrowing the chest and neck to meet human diminutions. it is hard to tell form this POV. but the shap of the head is not the centor of this peaces, the real draw is the fire with is cool as hell. thank you for sowing this off.

Grenyol responds:

I ended up drawing a thinner neck to symbolise the less wolf-like appearance as he is a demon, and the majority of the anatomy is different to how a live wolf would be (ie, horns, longer neck, belly plates, elongated limbs fire mains, four eyes and a thin waist) But thanks for the comment :)

[Bunny-Devil Girl]

i think the artest was going for a younger look StalkerPT that being the case the small hips and tiught butt work out just fine, it's the contour of the chest i feel would attract a sencond look, but art is art and i cant say anything against it, fifteen years of working with pin and chock and i cant do any better. thank you for the submission. i love it.

Twiddis responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the submission. Yeah, my friends have said her chest needs to be rounder. I needa improve my eye so I can spot more mistakes, and spot them sooner too. Thanks for your critique, it really helps!