i do like your idea, i think the game runs a touch on the ruff side, and the music is not was i was hopping for, i think if you added some more natural sound that could help out some: like a soft footstep sound, or running water, maybe a chattering from the torch. and if you had some sound or vision que for your ending that might be cool. i cant say this is more fun games i have played this week but it was a new look at something i have seen before. it's cool, smooth it out and add some sound and odsticals to run from and let me know how it looks and feels, thank you have a good day/