Dfeyder's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pyraraider]

i think this is fun. i dont understand the rules to some of the puzzles but that is my shortcoming not yours. i think that you have grate backgrounds and your soundtrack works for a 8-bit game. i think the biggest gripe i have is that your Avatar is missing some color, brighten him up and give some more animation and this will be a pretty good game.

[jelly drop]

"sushi Frenzy, you get one more Cat." this looks vary slimier to one of y favoret flash games and some how i love it. the music loop is somewhat on the short side but i cant flat you for that, you avatar looks flat sometimes to but that again is not a problem since your are using jelly physics. all i think i can say is good work. maybe some fanfare or other sound effects would be nice and i think that is all i will say. thank you again.

[Cat around Asia]

what you have here is a simple puzzle game, around level 9 it starts to get a little complex and that is cool, i like your cat character and this reminds me a little of the game Sushi Cat which i love. all and all you have a strong game hear. i imagine that on something like the Android store if you sold this for $0.99 it would bring in a few dollars. in the time i played i didn't notice in real issues with the gameplay and that is cool so is the interactive objects. thank you keep it up.

myplayyard responds:

Thank you :)

[Scrub~Flying Islands]

I love your presentation, the game looks and sounds good on the surface. i think pixel art is cool and i am a Gen. NES gamer so when i heard your chip tunes i got all jumpy. but after only a few moments of game-play I started to see some things i didn't care for. i know this sounds off but it feels like your draw-distance is to short, the screen scrolls right but it is still hard to judge your jumps and that is a deal beaker for most i would bet. maybe if you could pull back the POV some or add something like the "look mode" form Sonic 2, that could help you out some. i also think that some of the background object pop out more then they need to, sometimes it looks like there should be plat-foms where there are not. maybe that could be off set by adding some shadows or texuring the four-ground and backgrounds in some way like the chop and dale game did, or try what Simon's Quest did and make platforms all one color. i really cant say. let me know what you think.

[Sling]

well, i don't know how i feel about your atmospheric sound track. i think i got the same CD at target pf $4. your slingshot device looks like it work OK, i noticed that the boulders cant hit targets on the second bounce i thought that a bit strange. this looks straight to the point, you are more or less playing a side-scrolling duck hunt. i cant say that i liked it but the game works and in my book that nets you point. you are doing something i can not and i understand that. so i cant bring the hammer down just because this isn't to my fancy. i think maybe adding some more sounds would attract some more attintion but i cant think of anything else that seems off color. thank you.

[Cold Memories]

cosmetically i had some problems with this game and it crashed after an hour of play. i don't want to have to go back though all that to see the ending so i have to say this was cool. i think taking out or changing the text tone would help, add some more music and a save feature could be an idea i would like to see the background and foreground meld smother then they do but that is nothing more then a nitpick. all and all i had fun. thank you.

[Dear Mother]

everyone seems to think the same thing here, this game has a problem with convince. it seems you are trying to get across a message about honoring your mother, staying true to your faith, and the price of sin. all of these could make for an interesting story ark if you had a more in-depth game. there is a game called "flexible servile" it is a text based RPG where you walk around a dieing world and oyu need to find food and water as you explore you will be approached by monster or demons sometimes helping them will net you rewords other times it will turn you into a monster yourself. maybe that form of game would fit your needs. what do you think? thank you have a good day.

[Night Lights]

I think i saw this posted somewhere else at one point in time, the world changes based on the lighting. i think it is a grate idea. the art is simplistic, the music is fun (wait you used your avatar as the hero, cool) the only things i had trouble with i know are my fault and that is the way to go. explain the rules in game though example. that's what "Mega Man" did and "Metroid" and those are two of the greatest games ever made. thank you.

[Elephant Story]

ok that was cute and funny. the game play is not that grate but i love how you ended this. I don't know if this was just a practice flash or what but in spite of its simplicity i thought it was a fine gag. thank you.

[Dumb Raider 2]

this is a strange one, i like the controls and the art. i'm having some trouble with the platforming but that is me and me alone not a problem with the game. it looks like your half way between a runner and platformer game. because of the way the avatar moves i realy wont to sprint through the game but that doesn't seem to be working all that well. i think this is all around OK and I'm going to look at your other stuff. thank you.